Mizu
Crystal, Clear
Flowing, gushing, falling
My face feels it.
Water
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Mizu is the Japanese word for water and I well like it so I wrote this poem it is a cinquaine. It's not the most sophisticated of a cinquane but it works to satisfy my underlying elemental theme of water.
*This also satisfies the theme of foreign. This form is well very foreign to me and it's based off a Japanese word. Comments
 simple... unique... different...
-- "I shall slip through the darkness unnoticed like a dark unnoticeable slippy thing"  Thanks this was only my second attempt at a fixed poetry style.-- Member of ~collab-da ~Huggling-Bishies ~KHIIClub *riku-fanatic-club ~The-Anti-Yaoi-Club07 ~Vexen-FanClub #Writers-Workshop deviant #: 979767 |
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