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                                         Mizu
                                  Crystal, Clear
                           Flowing, gushing, falling
                                 My face feels it.
                                        Water
©2006-2009 =vainya
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Submitted: November 15, 2006
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Mizu is the Japanese word for water and I well like it so I wrote this poem it is a cinquaine. It's not the most sophisticated of a cinquane but it works to satisfy my underlying elemental theme of water.

*This also satisfies the theme of foreign. This form is well very foreign to me and it's based off a Japanese word.
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simple... unique... different...

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"I shall slip through the darkness unnoticed like a dark unnoticeable slippy thing"
:laughing: Thanks this was only my second attempt at a fixed poetry style.

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